"All that day he traveled, laying his course by the rounding sun.
The forest seemed interminable; nowhere did he discover a break in
it, not even a woodman's road. He had not known that he lived in so
wild a region. There was something uncanny in the revelation.
By nightfall he was fatigued, footsore, famishing. The thought of
his wife and children urged him on. At last he found a road which
led him in what he knew to be the right direction. It was as wide
and straight as a city street, yet it seemed untraveled. No fields
bordered it, no dwelling anywhere. Not so much as the barking of a
dog suggested human habitation. The black bodies of the trees
formed a straight wall on both sides, terminating on the horizon in
a point, like a diagram in a lesson in perspective. Overhead, as he
looked up through this rift in the wood, shone great garden stars
looking unfamiliar and grouped in strange constellations. He was
sure they were arranged in some order which had a secret and malign
significance. The wood on either side was full of singular noises,
among which--once, twice, and again--he distinctly heard whispers
in an unknown tongue.
His neck was in pain and lifting his hand to it found it horribly
swollen. He knew that it had a circle of black where the rope had
bruised it. His eyes felt congested; he could no longer close them.
His tongue was swollen with thirst; he relieved its fever by
thrusting it forward from between his teeth into the cold air. How
softly the turf had carpeted the untraveled avenue--he could no
longer feel the roadway beneath his feet!
Doubtless, despite his suffering, he had fallen asleep while
walking, for now he sees another scene--perhaps he has merely
recovered from a delirium. He stands at the gate of his own home.
All is as he left it, and all bright and beautiful in the morning
sunshine. He must have traveled the entire night. As he pushes open
the gate and passes up the wide white walk, he sees a flutter of
female garments; his wife, looking fresh and cool and sweet, steps
down from the veranda to meet him. At the bottom of the steps she
stands waiting, with a smile of ineffable joy, an attitude of
matchless grace and dignity. Ah, how beautiful she is! He springs
forward with extended arms."
Everything up until this point in the story was realistic and very believable. When this section starts to describe his surroundings as he is traveling, it seems kind of surreal and it seems like something was a little off--like the seemingly endless dense trees, there not being animals or people, him hearing strange voices. And he doesn't recognize the stars. This was a great build-up to his death, which I had not expected at all. These were all great hints as to what was coming--the reveal that all this was a hallucination because his brain was being deprived of oxygen. Right as he is about to embrace his wife, after the passage above, his neck breaks--he feels a horrible pain, everything goes white--all he felt of reality was the instant his neck broke and he died.
This quote is from chapter 3.
ReplyDeleteForrest, I'm wondering if you went back & re-read the story to see all of the clues Ambrose Bierce left for us? I will admit that I was very easily manipulated by the author into believing the escape was real. I wonder what the reason for this is - why do we so easily believe in the escape?
ReplyDeleteI think it is very believable because it's a very possible thing to happen (the rope breaking). Also, the hallucination is very detailed up until when things start to seem a little off (as i previously mentioned). As a reader you want the outcome to be good, so you naturally want to assume that all is well and he makes it out okay.
DeleteSpot on!
DeleteI believed the whole story was real even when it got to the part that you, Forrest, mentioned. It did seem a little weird but I was like oh well maybe its because he has been walking for such a long time after a rather traumatic experience. I do understand now why it seemed a little weird.
ReplyDeleteI like the thought that everything seemed strange to him because he had been through a traumatic experience. I think that is a great explanation if everything were actually true. I just kind of thought he was in a mental fog because of unbelief that he had actually escaped.
DeleteI think you did a great job with this Forrest and agree completely. I believe Bierce had a very good idea of how the human mind works.
ReplyDeleteIt almost reminds me of Shakespeare with how perceptive his analysis of the human psyche was.
DeleteI thought he had escaped too, I think the reason I so easily believed was because I sympathized with the main character and wished he could be reunited with his family. I didn't want him to die and was very surprised when at the end it showed that he didn't actually escape. I wouldn't say I was disappointed though, I think I was just surprised.
ReplyDeleteYes Kayla! That is how I felt also. The end was more of a surprise than a disappointment. Maybe I wasn't disappointed because I was trying to wrap my mind around what all had happened!
DeleteHoly cow, man! You are ridiculously good at analysis! You caught way more than i did, (not really.... actually really) but did you notice when the bullet was digging in lto his neck, it was in reference to the noose?
ReplyDeleteThis could be. It was like his mind couldn't process the pain so it just started warping reality.
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